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Hi I have recently began writing a story and I have a brief opening and if anyone could read it and give me some tips and opinions they have I would really appreciate it.
Many thanks❤️

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Wow, I love it! You are certainly creative, what with the cities name and the entire idea altogether. Also, just being a picky editor, you should use capitals for the start of names. But it's really good, either way!

I'd love if you'd check out my stories and give me feedback, including on my Fantasia series's. Nice book, keep writing!

Aria 💖

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Thank you! I will take your advice and work on those little errors and I would love to check out some of your work when I’m free❤️

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